Thursday, 28 August 2014

Argument Writing

People shouldn't throw rubbish in the sea.

I think people should stop throwing rubbish inside the sea
because the sea can get polluted. On the 3 News I saw
a sea that got polluted and no one could catch any fish.
If people continue to throw rubbish in the sea
we will have nothing to eat like fish and other sea
creatures and the sea will turn into green water
and it’s not good to swim in.

Another reason why rubbish is bad for the sea is because
it can also affect other animals like birds because when there
is a can or a bottle in the sea the birds will think it’s fish
and they will land on that can and they will stick their
beak inside the hole on top of the can or the bottle
and the birds head will get stuck and they will suffocate.

Now also people won’t swim in the dirty sea because
their going to get dirty from the rubbish and it might
hit them and they will think that it’s a fish and they might
get scared and they will run out of the sea.


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